After the Call
Freely inspired from the H.P. Lovecraft's short story "The temple"
To move : arrow left and right
To jump : arrow up
To interact with the environment : space
For a better experience, prefer playing fullscreen.
Status | Released |
Platforms | HTML5 |
Author | 1257thornothing |
Genre | Platformer |
Made with | Unity |
Tags | 8thalakajam, alakajam |
Comments
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Great game, good story! I noticed a few minor things you might consider looking at:
* Reading the captain diary - Page 3/3 reads as 2/3
* Crew dormitory - "The dormitory is desert." Should be "deserted" or "a desert", depending on what you're going for.
* A strange shrine - "Some kind of offrands..." Should be "offerings"
* The sickbay logbook - Only journal that doesn't have page numbers
* Look through the porthole - You use the word "ondulating," which should be "undulating"
* Command Station - "A muffled sound raises." Should be "rises."
* At the end - the intro page came back on, and I clicked "Play" but got an error.
Seriously, though. Great little game. I definitely want more!
Thank you very much for your feedback and for the corrections :)
The error on Play after the end is really odd... I will investigate it. Thank you for pointing it out !